feedback(proposal): comments on text + CL book summary; great LaTeX :-).

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\usepackage{csquotes}
\usepackage{xcolor}
% Tables
\usepackage{tabularx}
\usepackage{booktabs}
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\newcommand{\lfcomment}[1]{\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{LF}:~#1}}
%Uncomment below to remove comments from PDF yet keeping in the LaTeX :-)
%\renewcommand{\lfcomment}[1]{\relax}
\begin{document}
% Title Page and contents
\begin{titlepage}
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\begin{itemize}
\item Designing Emergency Checklists is difficult
\item Procedures in checklists must be tested in simulators~\cite{nasa-design},
which usally means trained pilots test it
which usually means trained pilots test it
\lfcomment{Testing for what? What's the baseline? I guess you will need some kind of evidence/argument that demonstrates that with and without the checklist results are markedly different. }
\item Checklists are usually carried out in high
workload environments, especially emergency ones
\end{itemize}
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\begin{itemize}
\item Testing procedures in checklists are often neglected~\cite{nasa-design}
\item There are some checklists that may not be fit
for certain scenarios
for certain scenarios \lfcomment{What check lists and what scenarios?}
\item Some checklists may make pilots \enquote{stuck}
\lfcomment{Yes, or might make them ignore the checklist. What criteria does that?}
\item Checklists may take too long to carry out - Swissair 111
\lfcomment{Yes. See Checklist manifesto test}
\end{itemize}
\subsubsection*{Rationale}
\begin{itemize}
\item Test checklists in a simulated environment
\item Test checklists in a simulated environment \lfcomment{Again, explain testing against what}
\item Results in being able to see where to improve checklists
\end{itemize}
\lfcomment{On CL book, Ch1 is about nature of where CL work best; Ch2 explains what a CL is and isn't; Ch3 you can ignore, it talks about checklist for unknown/unexpected scenarios (advanced CL) in building; Ch4 he discussed CL with chefs; Ch5 talks about CL failures and why; \textbf{Ch6 is about Boeing's CL ``factory''}; Ch7 and 8 are about applying the CL he came up with, here you get the examples of test/baseline criteria for CL; Ch9 he explains it in his own practice (this is daunting read)!.}
\subsection{Key Background Sources}
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\toprule
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\item Find how reproducible the checklist is
\end{enumerate}
\lfcomment{See above about "testing" what?}
\subsection*{Objectives}
\begin{enumerate}
\item Checklist Manager
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\item Capture state of aircraft
\item Simulate a pilot's actions
\item Simulate delay in actions
\lfcomment{\item Ensure consistency of checklist logic}
\end{enumerate}
\item Simulator connector
\begin{enumerate}
\item Connect to the flight simulator
\item Set up conditions of flight
\item Set up conditions for flight
\item Monitor and take Logic's actions
\end{enumerate}
\end{enumerate}