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 \subsection{Ethical Considerations}
 This project will involve referencing previous aviation
-accidents which had deaths involved, however, I will make
-sure to be respectful towards everyone involved in
-those accidents.
+accidents which had resulted in deaths. However, it should not be a 
+problem by being respectful towards everyone involved in those accidents.
 
 This project will also not involve the use of any users,
 so no data collection considerations will need to be taken