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 % Aim (or hypothesis) and Objectives
 \section{Aims and Objectives}
 \subsection*{Aims}
-\begin{enumerate}
-    \item Test Checklists for flaws that can compromise the
-      aircraft or that the checklist will not take too long
-      and overload pilot further
-    \item Test multiple conditions for that checklist
-    \item Find problems in the checklist
-    \item Find how reproducible the checklist is
-\end{enumerate}
+%\begin{enumerate}
+%    \item Test Checklists for flaws that can compromise the
+%      aircraft or that the checklist will not take too long
+%      and overload pilot further
+%    \item Test multiple conditions for that checklist
+%    \item Find problems in the checklist
+%    \item Find how reproducible the checklist is
+%\end{enumerate}
+%
+%\lfcomment{See above about "testing" what?}
 
-\lfcomment{See above about "testing" what?}
+To test checklists for flaws that could compromise the aircraft 
+and to make sure that the checklist can be completed in a reasonable 
+amount of time for multiple different conditions (such as weather or pilot's reaction times)
+that could affect the amount of time the pilots will have to complete the checklist.
+As a result, this will also test the reproducibility of the checklist's goal.
 
 \subsection*{Objectives}
 \begin{enumerate}